Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Thanks Be

So this is my poem I've written for school. Tell me what you think...

I am thankful for dreams and dolphins, for days and nights,and delphiniums, for dinners and donuts, and diaries.

I am thankful for silver moons, and red rosy fires, and clear lakes, and green leaves.

For magic and mysteries, for stars and stories, and family and forgiveness most of all.


2 comments:

  1. Very well done! I'm so happy you thought it interesting enough to put your words to it. Like I told your mom, it's fun to do it different years to see what else you become thankful for!

    (If I told you that my good friend is a dolphin trainer at a Chicago zoo, would you want to come visit some day?)

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  2. Very cool poem! Have you ever seen a dolphin in real life? I live near the beach in Florida and sometimes you can see them jumping in the ocean. It's really neat. I like how you used very descriptive words. I'm thankful for donuts too! I didn't get any dessert tonight. I should go get a donut!

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